The story

[Jaylolman]

So I am on a plane heading for the Island of Banoi a lush tropical paradise. When I got there I was greeted by a man in a white and red uniform. He told me to have a good day. It is 7:30 pm I decided to go and pay myself a visit to the bar I earned it anyway. When I got there this man there was going crazy yelling and screaming "The end is near."
People were getting annyoed so I tried to do something I went up to the guy told him to shut up. He pulled a gun up to my head. I am freaking out I kick the gun from his hand and it flys up into the air. I grab it as soon as it hits the floor I grab it and kill the man. The police said I wouldn't be charged because that guy was a crimanal he carried some sort of virus to the Island but secruity never noticed the just now noticed it in his pocket before i went up there to tell him to shut up .
4:56 pm I awake to the sound of screaming in the hallway. I get up and get dressed but I noticed when I peered out the of my room that the hallway was a complete mess. Well as soon as I looked for a weapon of some sort i headed out preparing for the worst. I found a man half bloody, it looked as if someone has took a chunk right out of his shoulder. When I looked up I saw the most ugliest thing ever, a maggot riden man with half of his left arm cut off. He tried attacking me and as soon as I killed him i figured out what was going on The whole Island was put in a quirintine I was like "A quarintine what for?"
Then i relized the man who attacked me was not alive AT ALL. He was a zombie, a made up character in many movies and video games. I tried to tell myself this is just a dream but it never was.

2 months later.

It has been 2 months since The outbreak of a zombie virus has hit the Island of Banoi mostly everyone here is dead. But today I found a group of survivors they were terrifed. I offered them if I could be of any help They said they needed to get to a bigger place a small cabin was not going to work. A guy named Dominic gave me a key card to a gigantic warehouse and he said that is were i should take the band of survivors. When I got there and secured the area I told the band of survivors it was okay to come to the warehouse. 0 3 years later.

3 Years Later

It has been 3 years and 2 months since the outbreak of Banoi. I went to the city today. A man offered me a ride up to the prison. I took it, but he said we are going to need way more supplies if were going to a prison. Once I got the supplies we went for the prison it was a long and bumby ride, but we made it. Once I got into the prison I was looking for a man named Tony little the suppose man who caused the outbreak.

3 hours later.

When I found Tony he said for me to look for a antidote for the outbreak.

3 months later.

I found an antidote, but he took it from me. I chased him for a couple minutes and followed him up onto the roof were he pulled a gun up to my head and shot me. I died instanly only to be woken up from death by a strange force. Tony was so shocked, he dropped the gun, I picked it up, and shot Tony. He fell off the prison into the water. The guy that gave me a ride to the prison also had a helicopter but we needed more parts.

4 days later.

After 4 days of looking for helicopter parts we found enough but we needed fuel and as soon as I got it he started building with a group of enginers that were fixing the truck in a safehouse.

4 weeks later.

He finished the helicopter and me and my friends Sam, Ty,and Marcus made it safely out of Banoi Island.
13 years later after the Banoi outbreak. When they found out it was me who stopped the outbreak at Banoi they sent me a big meddle along with 3 million dollors.
7 years later.
Another outbreak. the man said"Bring it on"

THE END so hope you liked my story feel free to add yours and have a good day

[Razorhawkzor]

Could you seperate it into paragraphs. It is a bit so cluncked together, making it a bit hard to read.

[Jaylolman]

sorry ill do that right now

[rrobb911]

Could you seperate it into paragraphs. It is a bit so cluncked together, making it a bit hard to read.

If anything is one big clump of text I just don't read it...

so yeah, you should paragraph that up.

[Jaylolman]

Grrr having trouble sepreating it into a paragraph

[Jaylolman]

Sorry everyone for it being clumped together just try to read it the best you can

[Jaylolman]

you know what just dont read it at all I dont feel like making another one so dont read it pretend its not there i know its kinda hard to read im having trouble trying ot paragragh it

[Razorhawkzor]

Don't worry, I felt like being a goody 2 shoes. Editing your story for grammar and paragraph errors.

[Jaylolman]

Don't worry, I felt like being a goody 2 shoes. Editing your story for grammar and paragraph errors.

thank you so much i owe you bigtime

[Razorhawkzor]

I don't get how there could be so many mistakes, I didn't bother using spell check.(much)

Near the end, i was confused as to what was going on, or how you survived being shot.

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So I am on a plane heading for the Island of Banoi a lush tropical paradise. When I got there I was greeted by a man in a white and red uniform. He told me to have a good day. It is 7:30 pm I decided to go and pay myself a visit to the bar I earned it anyway. When I got there this man there was going crazy yelling and screaming "The end is near."
People were getting annyoed so I tried to do something I went up to the guy told him to shut up. He pulled a gun up to my head. I am freaking out I kick the gun from his hand and it flys up into the air. I grab it as soon as it hits the floor I grab it and kill the man. The police said I wouldn't be charged because that guy was a crimanal he carried some sort of virus to the Island but secruity never noticed the just now noticed it in his pocket before i went up there to tell him to shut up .
4:56 pm I awake to the sound of screaming in the hallway. I get up and get dressed but I noticed when I peered out the of my room that the hallway was a complete mess. Well as soon as I looked for a weapon of some sort i headed out preparing for the worst. I found a man half bloody, it looked as if someone has took a chunk right out of his shoulder. When I looked up I saw the most ugliest thing ever, a maggot riden man with half of his left arm cut off. He tried attacking me and as soon as I killed him i figured out what was going on The whole Island was put in a quirintine I was like "A quarintine what for?"
Then i relized the man who attacked me was not alive AT ALL. He was a zombie, a made up character in many movies and video games. I tried to tell myself this is just a dream but it never was.

2 months later.

It has been 2 months since The outbreak of a zombie virus has hit the Island of Banoi mostly everyone here is dead. But today I found a group of survivors they were terrifed. I offered them if I could be of any help They said they needed to get to a bigger place a small cabin was not going to work. A guy named Dominic gave me a key card to a gigantic warehouse and he said that is were i should take the band of survivors. When I got there and secured the area I told the band of survivors it was okay to come to the warehouse. 0 3 years later.

3 Years Later

It has been 3 years and 2 months since the outbreak of Banoi. I went to the city today. A man offered me a ride up to the prison. I took it, but he said we are going to need way more supplies if were going to a prison. Once I got the supplies we went for the prison it was a long and bumby ride, but we made it. Once I got into the prison I was looking for a man named Tony little the suppose man who caused the outbreak.

3 hours later.

When I found Tony he said for me to look for a antidote for the outbreak.

3 months later.

I found an antidote, but he took it from me. I chased him for a couple minutes and followed him up onto the roof were he pulled a gun up to my head and shot me. I died instanly only to be woken up from death by a strange force. Tony was so shocked, he dropped the gun, I picked it up, and shot Tony. He fell off the prison into the water. The guy that gave me a ride to the prison also had a helicopter but we needed more parts.

4 days later.

After 4 days of looking for helicopter parts we found enough but we needed fuel and as soon as I got it he started building with a group of enginers that were fixing the truck in a safehouse.

4 weeks later.

He finished the helicopter and me and my friends Sam, Ty,and Marcus made it safely out of Banoi Island.
13 years later after the Banoi outbreak. When they found out it was me who stopped the outbreak at Banoi they sent me a big meddle along with 3 million dollors.
7 years later.
Another outbreak. the man said"Bring it on"

THE END so hope you liked my story feel free to add yours and have a good day